Case Study #1

The Curd Nerd

Our student had a passion for cheese. Our coaches suggested she locate a professional cheesemaker. After touring his factory, she set out to make cheese. She researched, signed up for cheese blogs and even joined the American Cheese Society. It wasn’t easy as this student with a mind for business needed to learn the chemistry of cheesemaking. It took several “fails” until she finally produced a perfect batch of mozzarella. With tenacity, pivoting and improvisation, she produced that perfect mozzarella.

Case Study #2

The Criminal Mind

This student revealed her family regularly attended night court. Digging deep, she told us about her fascination. Why were there so many repeat offenders and what could be done to break the cycle of recidivism? With our guidance, she located a group that has a zero recidivism rate. She met with former inmates, heard their stories (some were even in solitary confinement for months), and then signed up to volunteer with a group that helps reunite families with ex-cons. She helped at reunification functions and raised awareness by passing out leaflets in parks.

Case Study #3

The Entrepreneur Turned Global Advocate

This student had a T-shirt business but was keeping the profits. With our guidance, she located a charity that helps children in developing countries. She began donating her profits, and they even promoted her company on their website of preferred businesses. In need of volunteers, she became their first high school intern as a blog contributor. Going the extra mile, she became penpals with a Cambodian teen, further strengthening her global awareness and sensitivity.

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